Sunday, July 1, 2012

Longing... Comments

Rating: 4.5

Your eyes speak to me of longing
I see how you watch my lips move
Your eyes soft and inflamed
by the passion in your blood
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chantelle ribeiro
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Karen Sinclair 02 July 2012

This made me sigh... i remember those looks and thoughts so vividly and now i cherish them in my minds eye...the only time i get half that emotion now is if i cook a decent roast :) now im his comfortable slippers but thats fine... enjoy while it lasts...lovely piece

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Darkangel Flyfree 01 July 2012

A very beautiful poem! Great job here! ! !

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chantelle ribeiro

chantelle ribeiro

South Africa - Johannesburg
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