Longest Wait….. Comments

A mother's eyes never lies. She is waiting for a moment to hold her baby for the first time, And other dreams follow in line. She waits for a moment to give her child that first kiss, And feel the feeling of becoming mom & not miss. She keeps her hand on stomach & tells her child I promise you to give all happiness, She tells her child I will give you safest nest. Those nine months are longest period for a woman to wait, And she love each and every moment in those period & forget hate….. What a great mother you would make dear Anita! ! Every child in us would long to be that lucky sweet baby of yours. I wrote the way I felt, I think you won't mind. Thanks for sharing the poem. Subhas

Very good feeling has been expressed.

True....a god gift to women...the blessing to become a mother.....the blessing to become god on earth...good write my friend

And she love each and every moment in those period & forget hate….. Fantastic. Write more. Regards 10+ Apoet B

A hypothesis statement turns to reality....a gorgeous poetry... very beautiful....God bless....a 10 +++++

How sacred the time is, full of peace, before the birth of a new human being.10.

Wonderful poem with wonderful feelings a mother has! This is really a masterpiece.10++

Expressed successfully the thoughts of a mother before the baby's birth. But what you say about the mothers who leaves their babies in the streets? They would also have the similar feelings before the 'unwanted' baby's arrival.

Another masterpiece from your Arsenal....Brilliant feel and thoughts...its so amazing that you can write poems like this...clap clap clap