Long Worn Mask Comments

p.p.s. 3 - oh! i think i'd use " Long-Worn" or " Long-worn" in the title. bri :) :)

2 – My favorite stanza is my favorite for what it says, & correct punctuation, & rhyming. to MyPoemList bri :) p.s. Yes, it is true that I do not use ‘proper’ capitalization in much of my commenting, but I try to in my poems!

1 – i wonder if this is really about YOU. HMM? Nice writing. Good 'flow' and not bad rhyming. and i guess i understand it, sort of, though i'm not a psychologist! in several places your punctuation is inconsistent and not 'proper', but it bothered me very little.