Long Way To Go Comments

Great poem, very philosophical.

Don't stop till were in the ground.

lovely. all so very true.

is the end really the end or is it a new beginning

That is right and its never end and you keep going to you stop.

This poem is so very true. I love it!

Lovely poem. We are defined as much by the paths we choose not to travel as those we choose to tread.

When you wrote this poem it comes to moind what u were thinking and i ask u has ur road ever end and if not what keeps it going \

Very well written, Aqeb! This one flows very well, and I love your style of writing!

Good poem.. Your poems seem to be very popular..

Truer has not been said.

In deed life can favor no one when no one flavor's it.

'we still got a long way to go' very nicely composed. Like the idea. Well wriiten, good going. :)

That is true. We got make our own choice and we are the one in control of our life. This is life and there is always going to be decision we have to make and whatever happen at the end we got to accept.10+++

Your poems are a '10' in my book...

this leaves you thinking about the life in this world...how it fades in and out, how it all functions with human-emotion and directions. my fav is 'There are many roads to take and judgments to make', what an amazing aspect on life you expressed in two lines! Also you showed a great deal of 'holding onto hope' within this msg. I'm really loving your work! wow, so far I read 3 poems (this is the 3rd out of 9) and Already all three got 10/10 lol...Masha'Allah You are some poet man! good stuff...

Yet another poem that leaves you thinking about the life in this world...how it fades in and out, how it all functions with human-emotion and directions. my fav is 'There are many roads to take and judgments to make', what an amazing aspect on life! ! ! Also you showed a great deal of 'holding onto hope' within this msg. I'm really loving your work! ! 10+++

For a young man you are very wise. I love this part, 'The moments when we feel so cold, That is where we need to mold' We all want to feel good but we need those bad times to learn. Good observations.

Very insightful Aqeb! Nice!

It is a good poem with philosophic idea, economic brevity and poetic presentation.