Wednesday, June 6, 2012

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I sit here and listen
to each story told
and hear of tropical island breeze
that make the palm trees
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Kaila George
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Besa Dede 06 June 2012

The poem has a lovely harmony combined with rhyme, within its lines. I like so much the description you present the reader with. Just pay a little more attention to grammar and punctuation. Keep up the good work Regards, ~Besa

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Elena Sandu 06 June 2012

Oh you describe it so beautifully that I feel to love the shore of your parent's home, wherever could be. Thank you for share.

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Kaila George

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