Friday, December 27, 2013

Long To Belong Comments

Rating: 4.0

At first just a few notes went wrong and I think I picked them up but as my back is turned the song fell apart.
They say that everything has a place to belong but they are wrong.
Now they're gone my tongue is tied.
I feel like a ping pong ball being thrown from pillar to post.
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Lucy Grainger
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 February 2014

Wow amazing capture of feelings in splendid poetry. Yes fickle luv is like that too. Pls review my latest poem, 'selectin relaxation

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Smile :) 25 February 2014

this poem is soo good, deep....i looove it keep up the good work

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Jordan Lee 08 January 2014

wow. insperational :) :) :) :)

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