Long Sight Comments

i noticed two things.1. this poem bears the same number with the age on your biography.2. you are more of the descriptive poet. its an edge for any poet, but am nt satisfied, i need the life behind what you av written.what you exactly feel when you saw the light.

man you rock the stage! Great work

Your poem seen from rock fort temple-ucchi pillaiyar koil-is exhilarating. Your keen observation in the form of a poem is wonderful. Sorry I couldn't honour your invitation and read this nice piece early.Thanks and best wishes.

i like how you xpress yourself man.....cute poem

're so far away from them Safe in her tower blessing all with your compassion!

Nice image drawn with beautiful description

Thank you for the wonderfully descriptive poem. You've painted a beautiful picture of a view atop a tall hill!

not bad at all.an exquisite one there

a poem of descriptions. A good poem which needs another verse to bring the meaning of the descriptions in line with the human condition. You need to link all this with a view of the world, to make a statement of why it is here, whether it be good or bad. Poetry is about feeling what other people cannot see, and you showing it to them.

beautiful imageries.....reflects love for ur native place nd affection for it......happy read....keep that up! !

, Glittering necklaces, More like marching ants, such a descriptive poem, just lovely, so enjoyable.

great poem! beautifully said!

Good poem about nature. I like it

Good job, keep writing...

nice description..... very vivid... good ink.... keep writing

Beautiful poem, wonderful imagery.

a beautifully described account.

Interesting poem here. Read mine - O Night - Adeline

..well written..nice imagery..keep it up..

Let Lord Ganesh remove all hinderances for the free flow of the river.Nice narration.