Long Road Comments

These are my favorite lines Amber: 'Poppa works twice as hard now down at the mines But they say God gives you the best signs Its just that sometimes you have to paint them by hand It gradually flows through your fingers like sand...' Well written poet!

I enjoyed reading your lovely poem Amber, nice one!

Thank you so much i actually feel like these 3 poems are some of my best pieces i love them so much.

Part 4. " I couldn't ask God for a better sound"… your devoted love for both of them! I admire you, Amber! ! !

Part 3. Your positive energy, positive stance and positive state of mind, in a most excruciating situation, is amazing. And your talent in creative so beautiful poetry out of it! ! Top score and Myfavourites..

Part 2. With you solely taking care of them, while another brother " works twice as hard now down at the mines" to find money (maybe for their treatment) … Your positive energy,

Profound. The most subtle manner in which you present the loved ones, the mother and the brother who are bedridden, is totally astounding. And your nerves of steel, your happiness in their improving health, your prayers for their recovery…