Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Long Past Years Comments

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long past years seeing her
losing mind love occur
but I can't express myself
I feared you might not believe
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Vizard Dhawan
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Scarlett Outlaw 21 November 2012

This is so cool - so deep and emotional - is it about someone close to you? ? ? xx

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Asif Andalib 21 November 2012

Before submitting a poem check for typographical errors. The second line is my favorite but it should be losing mind love occur instead of loosing mind love occur

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