Friday, February 24, 2012

Long Nights..! ! Comments

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night seems to be so long,
i am tried of pretending to be strong!
to leave you was my own choice,
from this pit now i cannot rise!
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Megs Poems 12 March 2012

@okoye Charles: thanks a lot..! :)

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 07 March 2012

The opening and closing line....said it all...nice poem...keep it up

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Megs Poems 26 February 2012

but seems it is toughest to change..! i hope i too change with the time..! thanks brother..! :)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 February 2012

It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most intelligent, but the most responsive to change.....good poem litle sister.

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Life Goes On 25 February 2012

night seems to be so long, i am tired of pretending to be strong! These lines capture the intensity of the poem Nice poems

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