Sunday, March 16, 2008

Long Nights Comments

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It is so dark, so cold, so still,
I walk along, all else is still
I come here often, never in the day
to watch and keep
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Karin Elizabeth Martin
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Rani Turton 21 April 2008

The last two lines are masterly. The whole idea of the poem is wonderful. Thanks Karin.

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Ronald Kigozi Nsobya. 17 March 2008

There is a way, Elizabeth, that you use to sneak into the lives of people. This poem looks at a guard's beautiful, risky and often challenging task which must be appropriately rewarded but whose rewards are best reflected in the uncomfortable rest. well phrased and carefully put.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 March 2008

Great reading...philonthrophy....good job being done for the children of God

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Karin Elizabeth Martin

Karin Elizabeth Martin

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