Friday, February 24, 2006

Long N Lonesome Blues Comments

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Hollow winds around me roarin
Waters round me rise
I sit here my fate deploring
Tears swelling in my eyes
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Hubert J. Humperdink
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Patricia Gale 24 February 2006

Very nice display of rhyme. Hollow winds, nice line. Patricia

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Martha J. Eshelman-Smith 24 February 2006

Your rhyme seems natural, not forced - a delight so see rhyme used well. This poem begs to be sung.

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