Friday, June 29, 2012

Long Long Day Comments

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Long long day long long life
Why won't this rain stop
Where did the sunshine go?
I was just getting used to it
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Lori Koch
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Sina Farajzadeh 28 July 2012

You used natural elements in an effective way in your poem. Good. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poems. Best wishes.

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