Long long ago I went through the castle of leaves
Yellowing slowly in the moss
And far away barnacles clung desperately to rocks in the sea
Your memory better still your tender presence was there too
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Everything had aged except your presence Long long ago I went through the surf on a lonely day The waves were unreal even then The hulk of the shipwreck you knew about.. A very fine poem. tony
Love there was Alive delightfully Enjoyable That time Long long ago.....
Nostalgia of love of long like the hulk of ship or the hat of a woman is spinning by the wind of Spring in the Poet's mind! Thanks for sharing this modern poem here!
Wonderful imagery Robert. Literally takes the reader on a journey. Well deserved selection for Poem of the Day.
" Everything had aged at the same rate" Beautiful conceptualization, well worth modern poem of the Day.
It is a very nice poem indeed. One of the best i have gone through recent time. Thanks for sharing.
Long long ago I went through the surf on a lonely day The waves were unreal even then.....intensive expression. Beautiful poem. Congratulations for being selected this poem as modern poem of the POD.
the memory Long long ago you loved me/// great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Long long ago the body danced for your coming long long ago the heart loved you and now; still waiting......./// beautiful poem
The castle of leaves! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Long long ago I went through the castle of leaves Yellowing slowly in the moss And far away barnacles clung desperately to rocks in the sea.. like a short story you being your poem. lovely. tony
One of the best poems by Robert Desnos................................
What an absolutely beautiful poem, always loved Desnos. This is what poetry should be, in absolute. I wonder why this precious poem received low ratings. It is one of those rare poems that you really move with the poet and feel his feelings. " Everything has aged except your presence" This is a brilliant, supreme, immortal line.
Revisiting the cherished memories of moments spent with the sweet heart long long ago and their adorable effects. A well deserved modern poem of the day.