Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Long, Long Ago Comments

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The ocean swept it away.
The tides rolling in and out.
We had spent the whole day building
that castle fit for a hermit crab.
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Toni Rumbel 07 June 2011

This has an air of sadness about it. I think you may have been referring to your memories of lost love perhaps. I'm not too good at interpreting poems.

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