Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, June 21, 2012

Long Live Africa Comments

Rating: 5.0

O great people of Africa, you rise
Wait for no sweet and hollow promises
Prefer to plough your own field
There will definitely be very good yield
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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leafsailor a most profound poem, a prayer, I had time to read one last poem to night, this was perfect, you are an angel of hope and love, my friend, I join you in your words and send my spirit to help, more voices as yours are needed peace

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Re: Long live Africa (Score: 1) by sedubah on Friday, June 22,2012 (00: 04: 02) i would love to see this piece rewritten with similar meter from line to line the irregularness of the line lenghts makes for a difficult read i love the concept good job kenny

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O great people of Africa, you rise Wait for no sweet and hollow promises

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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