Long Have I Stood Comments

PoetrySoup 'This is a very clever, thought provoking poem Clive. So well written with the arrangement of words. Contains a lot of depth. So much conveyed within its lines. Really enjoyed it.'

I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'Well expressed. Thank you -'

Stood, gazed, suffered and thought long have i been doing it. a fine short piece of poem. tony

long standing! o' yeah; I'm the eternal being....! /// wonderful poem

the mirror the reflection of me the shadow of me under the sunny ray the existence the entity the being within shapeless shape a mutual fund of mind stability......

This started out more as an experiment, I almost didn't submit it, glad I did, thanks for all your comments :)

The long standing, circularize all of these things in continous cycle....maybe we have to take a rest a bit...before we discover more in this cycle as if there are branches that we never find before...just take a rest a while, may it refresh for longer standing...

Long gaze has given thoughts. Long you have stood. Long is amazing really. Wisely penned poem is shared.10