Friday, January 12, 2007

Long Handled Net Comments

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Just beyond reach was
the dream she didn't get.
Jokingly I suggested using
a longer handled net.
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Zen Bojczuk
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Don Mcwilliams 03 March 2008

Made me chuckle. Thanks for sharing, Zen. Best, Don

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Elysabeth Faslund 16 July 2007

Questions...that's the ticket! You have the reader thinking about the answers with this one. You've used that long handled net on the readers, caught them with this poem! xxElysabeth

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Kee Thampi 23 January 2007

This gifted poet tends to love to makes a clarion.. in poem it is more philosophical.... and more on life... A nice message to massage Just beyond reach was the dream she didn't get. Jokingly I suggested using

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Always & Forever 22 January 2007

Wonderfully written.

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Zen Bojczuk

Zen Bojczuk

Philadelphia, PA. USA
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