Long Grass Comments

This is a nicely constructed poem, and your description is paints a lovely picture. But I wish you had a little more to think about.

This poem reminds me so much of the song 'Talking Loud And Clear' by OMD Brilliant poetry Andrew Such a blissfull feel to it Love duncan X

Those were the days of bliss, when we had time to stand and stare, to lay and rest. Lovely piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Solid penning Andrew! ! A dreamy scene you have captured! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards , Friend Thad