Thursday, February 1, 2007

Long Gone Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

The air is filled with a chilly breeze,
The sky is black.
Keeps lighting up,
With coloured flashes.
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Hazel Mc Taggart
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Martine Kolber 01 February 2007

Sad, but excellent poem. I like it. Martine

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Jacqueline Antwi-danso 01 February 2007

This is a very nice, touching poem. You made everyone feel the way the girl was feeling. Keep it up.

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