Monday, October 18, 2010

Long Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep down my heart
Dwells, a lively smile
Of a soul long gone
To the land of spirits
...
Read full text

Ronald Nyakweba
COMMENTS
Pranab K Chakraborty 16 November 2010

Again you have touched the poetic heart also. Too simple your style of exposing yourself, but a poem stands strong with its aesthetical beauty. Reader should be sad for the loss but it gives another strength to combat the adverse waves of life. Thanks for inviting.........10/10 (if machine functions properly) Regards, pranab

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success