Monday, November 16, 2009

Long Forgotten (11/16/09) Comments

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The morning light rolls in, sending shimmering cascades across the shadowed dusty floor

Birds chirp merrily outside long barred windows, sending soft echoes through empty halls, welcoming the new day
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loNeLY AnGel 17 April 2010

nice poem. your an amazing writer..

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That was awesome! The imagery was really good. I wish it kept going. I love the last line to. It's really sad though.

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