Just you and me on the silent road
A long drive through the woods
An escape to taste the love
The gentle touch of the mist
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A touching poem. The words you chose were soft and gentle which added to the feeling of the writing.
This is a beautiful poem Rini. Very relaxing to the mind and left to the imagination of the open road. A 10+++
Hi Rini, The feeling of love expressed in this poem, quite differently, uniquely.: Just you and me on the silent road A long drive through the woods An escape to taste the love. And the creation of the conducive and apt environment to augment the mood: The gentle touch of the mist Smell of wild flowers in the air Sunlight creeping through the trees beautifully rendered. A lovely 100+++
such beauty in this verse now long driving I too will rehearse
Which pulls me towards you And I want you....... Beautiful
Life is a long and tiring drive but it's love that makes it a pleasure trip. A beautiful poem by Rini Jerry.
To arrive at the point. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
on the silent road through the woods mist Smell music calm and relaxed………. I was in tears when i read the rest… i want you always. Thank you for this poem of love.
It is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression.Each and every line is amusing.. Thanks for sharing.
dear poet this poem is great because it is explaining enthusiasm of love and relation ship with natural events thanks