Saturday, August 5, 2017

Long Drive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just you and me on the silent road
A long drive through the woods
An escape to taste the love
The gentle touch of the mist
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Rini Shibu
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Chaminda Pushpadewa 10 November 2018

dear poet this poem is great because it is explaining enthusiasm of love and relation ship with natural events thanks

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Carl Roussell 18 April 2018

A touching poem. The words you chose were soft and gentle which added to the feeling of the writing.

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Rini shibu 18 April 2018

Thanks Carl Roussel..! !

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White Tiger 06 February 2018

This is a beautiful poem Rini. Very relaxing to the mind and left to the imagination of the open road. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 07 February 2018

Thanks Tiger for your kind wordsw!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, The feeling of love expressed in this poem, quite differently, uniquely.: Just you and me on the silent road A long drive through the woods An escape to taste the love. And the creation of the conducive and apt environment to augment the mood: The gentle touch of the mist Smell of wild flowers in the air Sunlight creeping through the trees beautifully rendered. A lovely 100+++

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan for your lovely comment Rini

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Wilma Purcell 02 December 2017

I love this poem. Thanks for the opportunity.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks Wilma...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 September 2017

such beauty in this verse now long driving I too will rehearse

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Rini Shibu 01 October 2017

:) thank you dear poet Rini

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Khirod Dalpati 09 September 2017

Which pulls me towards you And I want you....... Beautiful

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Rini Shibu 09 September 2017

Thanks for reading this poem..

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

very nice and romantic poem I like very much

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Rini Shibu 28 August 2017

Thank you so much for commenting Messaoud

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

you're welcome

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

you're welcome my friend

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

very nice romantic poem I like it

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2017

Life is a long and tiring drive but it's love that makes it a pleasure trip. A beautiful poem by Rini Jerry.

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Rini Shibu 08 August 2017

Thanks Akhtar for your comments..

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2017

To arrive at the point. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 August 2017

Thank you so much Edward

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Dev Anand 06 August 2017

on the silent road through the woods mist Smell music calm and relaxed………. I was in tears when i read the rest… i want you always. Thank you for this poem of love.

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Rini Shibu 06 August 2017

Thank you Dev. Rini

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Lamar Cole 05 August 2017

Beautiful love poem with wonderful imagery.

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Rini Shibu 05 August 2017

Thanks Lam.. Yours comments means a lot to me

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2017

It is a beautiful poem on love having stunning expression.Each and every line is amusing.. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 05 August 2017

Thank you so much for the lovely comments

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