Friday, December 12, 2014

Long Distance Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

dear beloved
time flies unheeded
our days apart stretched
our love tormented
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong.So very true, long distance is oft a problem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

I came across this beautiful poem and I must write here 5 Stars Full for this impressive poem. I nhave enjoyed very much. A brilliant presentation and an excellent poem

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 26 December 2020

Beautiful, true love.

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Varsha M 06 July 2020

A beautiful poetry reflecting the true essence. Indeed long distance love is very difficult and demanding. Every feel and every word is true. Great work.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2020

dear beloved/hold onto our love/do not allow time to trick you/stay away from those temptations....wonderful expression! A brilliant poem....loved reading it...10++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 November 2019

Most Beautiful Message. I cite your last lines here: never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Then nothing can harm. Love that is strong will endure all storms. Excellent Poem of Strong Faith. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Score. You write very interesting topics, .

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A creative and compelling composition that is crammed with commitment. Well done!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 September 2017

dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die Beautiful love letter for the beloved. A nicely penned poem. 10+++. Subhas

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Ernest Makuakua 20 January 2016

dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. you know i'm inspired and motivated. thanks for sharing

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 21 October 2015

dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Verily, a great write........10

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Patricia Clark 25 February 2015

I like this poem so much. It speaks to the fears inherent in a long distance romance. Fears of being forgotten or replaced. Very well done. Trish

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Elisha Wall 20 January 2015

A niece poem that shows the undeniable temptations that lovers must conquer! Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 12 December 2014

Great poem. It reaffirms our faith in the bonds of love even in the face of adverse circumstances. Thanks for sharing the poem on PH.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

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