Thursday, June 2, 2016

Long Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

day seems very long
a squirrel is on the runs
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

When time is difficult to pass life counts on petty things.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Ahead lies hope! ! Waiting for a partner. Nice work.

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Unwritten Soul 03 June 2016

Jum squirrel Jump so day becme faster....Joking! If day feel too long because of loneliness...fill the time with something because one day we may say days go so fast and we never claim it back i hope you will find a way To keep beauty of the day stay with you And enjoy it every second with it

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Kelly Kurt 02 June 2016

So much can be read into those brief lines.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 June 2016

Superb depiction of loneliness. This three liner says a lot.10

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