Long Ago On A Lawn Comments

We climbed as kids Having nothing better to do Would turn to mountains of bills Receipts to file........../// beautiful poem penned

You never aged in my heart Your never went gray And other lines that weld the friendship into the matrix of time Great words thank you Adrian Flett

Wow! What an ode to friendship! Susan, you've made my heart skip a few beats. In such a wonderfully positive way. Half a century later, and I still have feelings for that girl across the street. Maybe I'll give her a call. You've written a heart-felt poem that brings back so many fond memories. Thank you so much. And a HUGE CONGRATULATIONS on receiving this great honour. Very well deserved! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I like it, so true, so human, so loving.

Congratulation Susan, i just log in to wish you this when poemhunter send me this alert and you know what for sure you deserve this honour because this write was done delicately, beautiful touch with nostalgic pen and emotion, the note also make me at least..feel the pristine of your friendship...both of you really have a wonderful bonding as friends forever.love this work so much. Keep writing Susan and congrats again

A wonderful piece of poetry Susan. Congratulations on being the Member of the week and thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry with us.

A beautiful piece of art containing a story we can all relate to Susan, memories were made to write about.

Let me begin by saying that the poem is simply wonderful. The poem on a nostalgic note relates and reflects the present realities of life which each one of us has to face in our everyday life. Is there a key to open up the door of the past?

Congrats my friend, for another amazing and heartfelt poem and being chosen. So nice to return to those carefree summer days from yesteryear, even if only in thought....Thank you for sharing and letting us drift away for the moment. You are amazing. Write on!

Another amazing poem..... Susan, one that touches everyone in their mind and hearts and brings them to those carefree days of summer.Thank you.. it deserves without question to be poem of the week! Congrats my friend! and...write on.....

A beautiful, emotional pent-up poem, with lovely imagery and flow of thought. Enjoy the read, Susan Lacovara.

This poem is like a fresh breeze of morning youth. Life, vigour and laughter along with a bright sunny day gives us encouragement. Well done.

You never aged in my heart You never went gray You're still the same old smiling boy Whose door I knocked on 'Come out and play' A great poem by the poet. Congrats for the reward.

Lovely poem.. You never aged in my heart.. Congratulations

Very well crafted..........Susan........with a lot of emotion.........thanks for sharing

Nice! The innocense touches us all thanks

beautiful poem on ever young childhood playmates and memories. congratulations for Member poem place Susan.

You never aged in my heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A fine poem, Susan..... congrats for being chosen...10++++

A friend deserves a poem.