Saturday, October 7, 2017

Long Ago Comments

Rating: 4.5

Purple lilies sing no more,
The songs that once were known,
Life brings clouds of come and go
Then suddenly,
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Sandra Feldman
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Tamara Beryl Latham 13 September 2019

Your poem so completely expresses the loneliness that ts felt when a partner exits the relationship. The pain is evident in each of the words in your verse and the reader is aware of your great loss, referencing love. A wonderful write. : -)

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

Realisation of being alone comes suddenly. It is the loneliest feeling of all.

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Chatem Mercedes 08 March 2018

all the roses died at once, Goodbyes were never said [3

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