Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Long Ago Comments

Rating: 4.9

in your light I learnt how to love
in your beauty how to make poems
you danced inside my chest
where no one saw you
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Rigzin Namgyal
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Patricia Grantham 05 October 2013

Love changes just like the weather. From hot to cold, calm to windy and water to ice. We have to adjust to it and not it to us. I have a poem titled Love Seesaw and If We Ever Meet Again. Please take a look when you get a chance. Nice.

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Romeo Della Valle 30 July 2013

My dear friend, I wish you would continue sharing your talented works with the Poetry World! One thing for sure, your talent is obvious and you should continue to share it with the rest of the World! I would be more than glad read them and honestly comment on them! Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo, New York City

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Hunter Hunters 18 October 2012

Ragzin, i share your pain as u write this emotional poem, i wish u can see that person in paradise

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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 13 October 2012

Okay, ... Wont comment cuz i'm jealous of dis write, its just, ....beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 October 2012

in your beauty how to make poems.. yes it is god gift.. comes of your own.. nice poem...10

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Indranil Bhaduri 10 October 2012

A fantastic work of expressions, past and present, from the heart. The pain can be felt within. Wonderful!

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Valerie Dohren 10 October 2012

Beautiful write, very good expression of feelings.

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Hazel Durham 10 October 2012

Deep and intense emotions with a shocking sadness that enfolds! Brilliant write!

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Neela Nath Das 10 October 2012

Huh! A long sigh I heaved. really, love in past, now and what will be in future nobody knows.But, love does not lose its way ever. Sometimes it has to hide its flow.Love does n't have speed like fast or slow.Great!

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Shivani Gupta 10 October 2012

nice poem...! I Its laden with pain, emotions..you've articulated your feelings nicely..keep wriring!

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Babatunde Aremu 10 October 2012

This poem is laden with emotion. It looks like 'paradise Lost'. Good poem, I like it

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Za Thinley Gytso 05 October 2012

A poem with full of imagery and diction, its awesome way of expressing the pain of the past and experience we get from it. keep on writing and i would like read more of your poems..

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Terry O'leary 26 September 2012

Love is a tough adversary... as you so well express... Twrry

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Dechen Doma Sherpa 26 September 2012

A passionate poem, tale of a soul lost between the memories and the realities. what happened was long ago but the passion still burns the heart of the lover. Emotions beautifully depicted

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Mifa Adejumo 26 September 2012

nostalgic...nice read. keep writing

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