in your light I learnt how to love
in your beauty how to make poems
you danced inside my chest
where no one saw you
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My dear friend, I wish you would continue sharing your talented works with the Poetry World! One thing for sure, your talent is obvious and you should continue to share it with the rest of the World! I would be more than glad read them and honestly comment on them! Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo, New York City
Ragzin, i share your pain as u write this emotional poem, i wish u can see that person in paradise
Okay, ... Wont comment cuz i'm jealous of dis write, its just, ....beautiful
in your beauty how to make poems.. yes it is god gift.. comes of your own.. nice poem...10
A fantastic work of expressions, past and present, from the heart. The pain can be felt within. Wonderful!
Deep and intense emotions with a shocking sadness that enfolds! Brilliant write!
Huh! A long sigh I heaved. really, love in past, now and what will be in future nobody knows.But, love does not lose its way ever. Sometimes it has to hide its flow.Love does n't have speed like fast or slow.Great!
nice poem...! I Its laden with pain, emotions..you've articulated your feelings nicely..keep wriring!
This poem is laden with emotion. It looks like 'paradise Lost'. Good poem, I like it
A poem with full of imagery and diction, its awesome way of expressing the pain of the past and experience we get from it. keep on writing and i would like read more of your poems..
Love is a tough adversary... as you so well express... Twrry
A passionate poem, tale of a soul lost between the memories and the realities. what happened was long ago but the passion still burns the heart of the lover. Emotions beautifully depicted
Love changes just like the weather. From hot to cold, calm to windy and water to ice. We have to adjust to it and not it to us. I have a poem titled Love Seesaw and If We Ever Meet Again. Please take a look when you get a chance. Nice.