Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Lonesome Tree Comments

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There was a tree,
a very lonesome tree,
for he had not a friend,
to pretent with and to play with.
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Linda Beach
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Karen Sinclair 15 May 2013

Lovely and clever.... dare i say the ups and downs of life... im not being flippant here, your write took me on a journey, the first part was quite traditional, then it lifted when the swing wrapped itself around (hugging, it seemed) and the child came, i assumed would be even more uplifting but the child ruined the companionship... i really enjoyed this...thanks karen

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