Lonesome Place Comments

You can feel a lonesome town, and wish to move somewhere else. He may find peace down by the river, but he is weary of life. I like the colloquial speech, not correct English, but more real- 'A po', po' boy'; 'de waters'; ' S' about to overcome me'. A brilliant poem written from the heart.

Cause there ain't any worries where the water goes/ Beautiful and profound.

A short and sweet poem with depth and throwing light on an important aspect of human psyche.