Tuesday, July 25, 2017

Lonesome Comments

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My heart a bowl of many flowers ripe and odorant
Needing a vine to mata its nectar, loneliness so rampant
And now the eyes search in fetch of a damsel
Who alone shall keep the heart alive and to marvel
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Michael Eziudo
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John Richard Anderson 25 July 2017

Nice poem, though the cliches such as 'head over hills' clashes with me a tad. Cheers and Best Wishes

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Benin City, Nigeria
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