Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Lonesome Comments

Rating: 4.3

Once again I'm there, once again I'm in that space.
Once again I'm stranded,
Once again I'm groping in the dark,
And there is just no hint of even a tiny spark.
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Rambling Dreamer
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Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

Please dont be alone. The worst thing you can come up with is to know that you are alone and you will remain so. No, thats not gonna happen to us and that should not either. Welcome to PH, where you can have a family of compassion and love from a bunch of people who just accept the way you are. As the poem is concerned is quite excellent!

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Nikita Das 21 August 2013

thank you :) well noted will try refining :)

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

A warm welcome to PH, this being your first poem here. The poem will look better if trimmed. Need not worry about rhyme, words flow out naturally from your mind. Just a little rearrangement, to give a shape.

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Dave Walker 07 August 2013

A great poem, in the passed I too have been I the dark.

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