Saturday, October 27, 2012

Lonelyness Comments

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I find myself once again, alone and sitting on my bed
Staring at the cold walls as my soul trys to escape from getting sad
Some nights loneliness gets to me, thats when i shed tear after tear
Is like a wave of sadness came over me, without any warning creeping from behind
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Vishal Sharma 05 January 2013

this poem moved my mind....what a great flow of words...nice

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Powerful message about the struggle of lonliness. Well done my friend!

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Hemraj Koirala 29 October 2012

Beautiful poem awesome imagination

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