Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Lonely Tears.. Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart already so dark, and so sore
I'm reaching deep, into the place of my very core
So much has happened here; I need to hide
Locked away in secret, with all my might
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Billy Simani 08 February 2013

Very touching, inspirational and emotional. I love the way you play with the rhyming words and the way your theme builds up as you flow.

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Rick Adriolo

Rick Adriolo

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