Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Lonely Teardrops Comments

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Lonely teardrops
Salty taste
Aching heart
Loving waste
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Bradley Lester
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

ideas are set so poetically.. all vocab breathe the theme..mood, tone, fine..to ponder on..10+++++

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Shagun Khera 10 June 2009

quite precise....appereciate the brevity of the poem... two words for the descriptions.. nice..

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Bradley Lester

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