Monday, May 15, 2017

Lonely Street Comments

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I walk down the solitary street
Heading towards the heartbreak resort
And ask for a favorite
'I can't make it without you' drink
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Pius Didier 19 May 2017

And throw myself off, But I'm afraid... Only the heart can feel Only the knees can neel Only the thug can keel But not a mortal man drill The beauty in your nail A Wonderful poem, a wonderful presentation... Bed of lies

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2017

But I'm afraid That I will fall on your bed Your bed of lies. Ver well presented..... love, lies, pain, sufferings, betrayal ..a very good poem my dear poet. tony

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