Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Lonely State Comments

Rating: 3.5

In my lonely state, i forver stay
Isolated from the world and humanity
Broken spirit, crushed heart, depressed
and too many worlds apart
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Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal
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James Mclain 08 July 2009

it seems to me you think about things as you should..every one is not a person who wants the lime light..and people who are hurt shy away as you said from it.. :) ....iip

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Faran Khalid 03 July 2009

VERY GOOD POEM KEEP IT UP 10 PLUSSS

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immortal Butterfly 03 May 2009

You're writing leaves me speechless in a way I have never been.

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Eyan Desir 02 May 2009

nice write.....................................

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Reetessh Sabrr 01 May 2009

the best way to console thyself is to pour out..so done simply well

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Emily Core 30 April 2009

nothing but the true thats all anyone needs no and no less

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Anthony Arias 29 April 2009

You owe nothing to anyone but yourself Darling. Your poems read like confessions. And they're beautiful! A.

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Mona Martinez 25 April 2009

nice. i couldn't have said it better. i feel that way at times too. but, i'm learning it's okay to be different. it's okay to be who you are. nobody was made perfect. why should we always act like we are?

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Absent Wryta 22 April 2009

Its ok to be different. Nicely constructed emotional piece

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