Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Lonely Soul! Comments

Rating: 3.8

In a dark corner
Sits a little girl
Looking like a mourner
Without her own life
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sania harris
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Kelvin Karani 27 March 2009

More of despised soul than lonely. But at the end of the day, nothing changes- whether lonely or despised. That's her life, and that's the life of many.

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&&angel4ever && 04 November 2008

Its sad and u feel pity for her at the same time but its life and we have to face it with courage

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 September 2008

its so sad but trust me you'd be free once your soul is set free.keep writing nia!

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Lava P 06 September 2008

sad--------!

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In all of your poems I see abandonment and abuse.A little trick I learned when I was your age because I felt the same way that life was very bleak and I could not see the light at the end of the tunnel.Give yourself a big hug and say to yourself'I will survive.I love me.'It has always got me through the bad times.Your poem is very poignant and well written.I'm glad you contacted me.You have a friend with me.

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