Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Lonely Silhouette Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dancing sillhouettes of your memory
left me with broken promices and a
heart that can not mend
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Bonnie Collins
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Laurie Hill 31 July 2009

and mostly a silhouette in search of its image........ Loved this...so very poignant, touches the reader with a sadness.......

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The imagery is outstanding and the ending so perfect, even though it is so very sad poem. I really liked the colors you use and I imagined these in contrast to a black silhouette. Excellent Bonnie!

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Robert Sheridan 17 September 2008

Bonnie, Your writings captivate the mind and the soul with depth and feeling - never lay your pen down. It would be a great loss to us all not being able to read your poetry! Robert

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Thad Wilk 28 May 2008

This is a very poignant yet delightful poem, love it Bonnie! ! *10*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Bonnie, your imagework is as resplendent as the Christmas lights at Rockefeller Center...And, as always...tour sructural, is of crisp, tight & smooooothe consequence! Bravo, Magnifico, Bien & tres bon! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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