Monday, September 2, 2019

Lonely Ship Comments

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He told her, so you say that you love me.
Then why do I feel that I have been stung by a bee.
Or like a raccoon trapped by a hound dog in a tree.
Or a lonely ship that is out to sea.
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Lamar Cole
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Practicing Poetess 02 September 2019

Poor guy. I'm certain that he deserves better, and I hope that he finds it! :) (You can tell that I put myself into the shoes of characters in poetry!)

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