Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Lonely Shame Comments
Rating: ★2.8
Before my hand strikes the door.
I don't know my mind, Please stop!
Short knuckles white, light flashed.
She will hear me scream, or worse.
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Viola Grey
09 May 2009
I quite like this...I can almost see you talking to yourself on a doorstep before slapping your own face with regret...nice work.
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Ashleymarie love
07 May 2009
it is always smarter to think before you act good poem Ashleymarie
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8/14/2025 5:09:04 PM # 1.0.0
wow, you can't stop impressing me, that was lovely 'story telling' poem, I really enjoyed reading it, so strong and touching, very well done :)