Saturday, September 3, 2022

Lonely Secret. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone
And not alone,
How can that be?
As long as
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Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS
Grammar Police 04 September 2022

You, use, far, too, many, commas, in, all, your, poems! This one is not as bad as most.

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Nosheen Irfan 04 September 2022

Very well said Sandra. Only poetry can give that sense of completion that even being being alone doesn't feel like a burden. A beautiful thought!

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2022

I appreciate your very lovely and understanding comment very much. Your very fine poetry does you honor

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2022

Only true poets, like yourself and others at this site can truly understand this, . Thank you so much fir reading and for your lovely comment.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 September 2022

Poetry is a precious friend. Wonderful!

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2022

How beautifully understood. Thank you, so very much.

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