Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Lonely Refrain Comments

Rating: 4.5

I once dreamt a dream, of life filled with love
And a girl I loved whom I had dreamt of
So much was in store, so much left to do
But, love wasn't mine; her heart wasn't true
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Danny Speicher
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 01 December 2009

wow, lovely poem, felt your love and your anger, the last 2 lines are my top favorite, unique and poetic idea expressed in a neat and smooth flow of words, the title itself is very catching, well done, definately a 10 :)

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