Friday, July 26, 2013

Lonely Pebbles Comments

Rating: 5.0

A pebble amid the masses
left alone on the shore
an angry storm haressing
surging in once more.
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Heather Burns
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Jesse Ellsbury 31 July 2013

Very nice, I like the personification of the pebbles. Reminds me of Blake's The Clod and the Pebble.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 July 2013

Beautiful poem. The pebble is there and it should know. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Lovely poem...Lonely peebles stood taking all the fury of tides...but it never got washed away with the tides... Meaningful write...Loved reading it..

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 July 2013

Pebbles upon the shore moulding under the waves shaping the unsung history of men and land for tomorrow

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Nader Baheri 27 July 2013

short but so meaningful. ~nb

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