Sunday, January 17, 2010

~~`lonely Pain`~~ Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The sky looked blue as i woke up,
but soon rain made up the mess.
Now that you've made the things all clear,
tears filled up all of the space.
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Menime Soul
alone Lips Staring
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Josh Tannehill 14 November 2012

can i turn this into a song and post this on youtube if igive you credit for the lyrics please

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 22 April 2010

fantastic poem...loved reading it10+

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Adam Reed 23 January 2010

very well done. love the 'pieces of my heart coming out of my eyes' line. expertly done menime fantastic

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Vaishakseetharam Dattani 17 January 2010

Excellen work friend...Keep it up! ! !

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