Saturday, May 8, 2010

Lonely Old Man (Part1) Comments

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Once on a hill lived an old man
beside his house stood a rusty old van
On the veranda in his rocking chair
Over the valley he would sit and stare
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Vaughn Bekker
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Pranab K Chakraborty 10 May 2010

Good relation between man and animal you have painted. Documentation of a lonely old man, a jounalistic piece of work no doubt. Above all we can feel the dog also very near. Old style of writing poetry. Any way, write more and come out from this phase of mingling journalism in poetry. Run long.....Live long......write more...... Apoet Bangla

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