Thursday, May 10, 2018

Lonely Mountains Of Kumaon. Comments

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Lonely is the mist of these hills
Lost high the thick forests of deodar رخت
Thin clouds hurrying over peaks
Even bird calls are lonely
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Geoffrey Fafard
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John Ahern 10 May 2018

Welcome back Geoffrey, Nature and your skills of describing the scenery around you join us once again.

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Geoffrey Fafard 11 May 2018

John thank you. You are such a stalwart commenter and poet and yes I am happy to be home and putting pen to paper. This was a different journey into remote Northern India and its Himalayan hills. I am older now and it was a bit of a struggle but I made it....! Cheers mate...Geoffrey.

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Rajnish Manga 10 May 2018

Initially, the whole thing appeared to be indicating a sad, gloomy and tiring atmosphere (sad songs/ I sit suspended/ derelict unreality) but it turned out to be friendly towards the end- that is what Kumaon is known for. Thanks, Geoffrey. I quote: The winds, the perfume of the forest At least here I can breathe softly And be perfectly and quietly alone.

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Geoffrey Fafard 10 May 2018

Rajnish kind sir, thank you for your wonderful comments and for reading my poem on your stunning Kumaon area. I keep returning I love it so much. Cheers, Geoffrey.

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Robert Murray Smith 10 May 2018

Geoffrey, a nice nature poem. Hope you are well.+++10 Robert

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Geoffrey Fafard 10 May 2018

Robert so good to hear from you again. I was a little unwell in India but I am coming good now. Cheers my friend. Geoffrey.

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