Saturday, October 18, 2014

Lonely Moon Comments

Rating: 4.7

The Moon will shine,
Without your smile,
But no longer shall it be,
A Moon that shines for me,
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Sandra Feldman
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Tyler Cobb 09 September 2025

I feel this poem a lot! For me probably in different reasoning than for most? But because after my injury it's left me abandoned by all my old friends. And I'm unable to get out and make new friends so it's left me constantly sitting by myself for many many years

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Rob Lamberton 17 August 2025

There is a certain gravitational pull within this poem!

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Timber Koleden 18 June 2025

What a wonderful poem! So full of beauty! Thank you so much for this piece!

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Abigail Abi 03 April 2025

This poem is heartbreakingly beautiful. The imagery of the lonely Moon perfectly captures the emptiness of loss. The way you weave sorrow into each line makes it feel so real, like a quiet ache in the night sky. It truly speaks to the soul—haunting, deep, and unforgettable.

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Sandra Feldman 19 June 2025

Thank you so uch for your beautiful and understanding words for this poem. Truly appreciated!

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Munashe Gumbonzbvanda 13 March 2025

the moon has the earth

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Today this marvellous poem adorns Position Number Three in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets on PoemHunter. Congratulations, Sandra

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Leria Hawkins 11 February 2025

Bravo, what a great poem! I love it!

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Freni Karaluthara 17 January 2025

You may love to read my poem: In my soul's cathedral

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Freni Karaluthara 17 January 2025

Congratulations, Sandra, on your exquisite poem! Your words beautifully capture the profound depth of emotion that comes with loss and loneliness.

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Tyler Cobb 14 January 2025

Although it sounds as if you're going through a hard time in life this poem is still very well written! I know what it's like to go to very very hard and dark times in life and struggle very hard to get out of it. So I hope you're doing well, but still very well written home!

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Koffi B Sossou 08 January 2025

The beauty of the poem lies in its density. The poet mourns the absence of their lover whose smile is compared to te shininess of the moon. Thier absence is equal to the absence of the moon to the speaker.

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Koffi B Sossou 08 January 2025

'The Moon will shine, Without your smile, But no longer shall it be, A Moon that shines for me, ...'. This is deep.

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vicki christison 14 August 2024

I love the way you wrote about the moon being cold and distant. Most people idolize the moon and you spoke the truth.

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John Prophet 13 August 2024

Thank you for all your wonderful reviews

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John Prophet 13 August 2024

Bravo, wonderful write.

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Sandra Feldman 11 February 2025

So honored! Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2024

Moon is moon, it's sometimes tired of routine but rises again as crescent. Love may be dormant sometimes but it never dies. A nice poem from a very good poetess.

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Bill Cantrell 09 April 2024

Why do I find myself always coming back to this poem? Because it is one of the best poems ever written

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Bri Edwards 23 March 2024

Sandra, this is now a 'favorite' for me. : ) bri

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Sandra Feldman 11 February 2025

Veery honored y your sincere comment! Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 23 March 2024

The giant-impact theory is most widely accepted today. This proposes that the Moon formed during a collision between the Earth and another small planet, about the size of the planet Mars. The debris from this impact collected in an orbit around Earth to form the Moon.

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Josehf Murchison 01 December 2023

Love the graphics nicely done.

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