Lonely Lullaby Comments

A beautiful love story filled with so many emotions. Reminds me of the sweet song that a mother sings to her newborn baby. A lullaby sung with all of the love and care then listened to with undivided attention then slowly ends in sleep. Loved it.

Nicely done, the raw emotion is very believable. My favorite verse is Forge a false devotion soon to die - it's a beautiful way to describe the lullaby that can promise so many sweet things, but fades away as sleep grips you.