Thursday, September 28, 2006

Lonely In The World Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am lonely in the world,
Trying to cry,
But no tears are coming out,
Noone else is here to hold me not even my parents,
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christina helms
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Venkatesh Davangere 28 September 2012

Nice excerption of your lonely feeling. i think you are mising your grandpa very much...you need a true love more than enything. But dear, in your poem none else has become noone else. Hve great future. Read my poems if you have time

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Tunji Ibrahim 28 September 2012

The pour of feelings at the very most. Simple but not simplistic... Keep on moving on, gal.

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Chris Mendros 28 September 2007

Is there anything worse than when the tears won't come? It's as if they've deserted you, too. Touching self-examination, strong and honest.

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Vallerie Lobell 28 September 2006

Hi Christina......it is a big world ain't it? ......don't worry...hardly anybody read or commented on my poems either today....just keep posting them and get those feelings out....best wishes Vallerie

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